The Bogor Botanical Gardens

The Bogor Botanical Gardens

The bogor botanical gardens is one of the best place visit in bogor city. Several years ago the bogor botanical gardens was not as beautiful as now, especially the sidewalk that around the bogor botanical gardens. In the past that sidewalk was broken and so dirty. There were a lot of damage to the sidewalks and fences surrounding the bogor botanical gardens. Many sreet vendors sell carelessly and throw garbage on the sidewalk. The sidewalk was too small and narrow.


But now the sidewalk already change. We can see how clean and organized the sidewalks around the bogor botanical gardens. The sidewalks have two parts for pedestrians and special users of bicycle. After that The sidewalks are bigger now. This change on the sidewalk meant that the government in Bogor managed to carry out their responsibilities in repairing the city of Bogor.


Comments

  1. UnknownOctober 3, 2018 at 3:30 AM

    You have to be carefull in spelling word by capital letters.
    bogor should be Bogor
    The should be the

    ReplyDelete
  2. mangtriyaOctober 3, 2018 at 8:07 AM

    In my opinion this paragraph is good enough, but you have to add to infinitive, as like at the first sentence it should be "the best place to visit in bogor city".
    In the second paragraph at the first sentence "But now the sidewalk already change" it's should be using present perfect, and it will be "But now the sidewalk has changed", and also " but" can not in the first sentence because it's conjunction.

    ReplyDelete
  3. UnknownOctober 3, 2018 at 10:29 AM

    In my opinion, this paragraph is good but you must be careful punctuantion and capitalised

    ReplyDelete
  4. UnknownOctober 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM

    Actually this paragraph is good, but I think in the first paragraph you should be more carefully with the spelling word, you should use capital letters in writing the name of the city or the name of a place and you may can add any infinitive word in your sentences.

    ReplyDelete
  5. puspadwwOctober 10, 2018 at 8:20 AM

    In my opinion your paragraph is good but you have to be carefull in capital letter in writing a name of place for example "bogor" it will be "Bogor" .

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Image
The cause of the decline in tourist visit to Bali !!! People like to have a good vacation. The average of tourist has had a pleasant holiday image with the aim to entertain themselves from their busy work in their daily lives.   Every people usually have their own plan for   have a vacation, they will begin to see which destinations are interesting and comfortable.   People will start thinking about the budget they have to spend on a vacation.   This certainly applies to foreign tourists and tourists from within the country. Bali is one of the most popular destinations frequented by foreign tourists and domestic tourists, but according to the Head of BPS ( Badan Pusat Statistik) Bali Mr. Nugroho Adi, the number of foreign tourists going to Bali continues to decline, the quality of foreign tourists also decreases, as seen from the decrease in foreign tourists' spending both from Disparda data and   Bali Superwisman data. There are three causes of the Declin...
Read more

Marriage certification? What for?

Marriage certification?  What for? Is this policy has benefit?  The government requires couples who want to get married to have a proper marriage certification for all regions in Indonesia.  Including in Jakarta. This rule will begin to be implemented in 2020. Some brides have also questioned the terms of the rule. The DKI Jakarta Provincial Health Office has also socialized the process and requirements to obtain a marriage-worthy certificate for the bride and groom. The Government said this program aims to determine the health condition of the bride and groom, provide physical and psychological health information, and ensure the bride and groom are ready to get married. This marriage-worthy certificate is contained in the Governor Regulation of the Special Capital Region of Jakarta (DKI) Number 185 of 2017, that the bride and groom who is going to get married can have a health check at the nearest health center or hospital. The bride and groom will do a medic...
Read more